"I want to burn for you," Zelda agreed. She was well on her way, if how she felt now was any indication and she hoped that it was as pleasurable for Erik as it was for her.
"I want to make you burn for me too."
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"I want to burn for you," Zelda agreed. She was well on her way, if how she felt now was any indication and she hoped that it was as pleasurable for Erik as it was for her.
"I want to make you burn for me too."